This is too funny.
Were neck deep in seriousness.
It sounds like a miniature build-up to a long song, imo go for deeper/lower sound especially nearing the big drop(if you plan on putting one in there). but overall sounds good :)
It's a preview as I say in the description, not done yet! :)
Should finish? :)
the rhythm and rhymes fit perfectly great job
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